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INTRODUCTION AND NAVIGATION – REFLECTION – LEARNING OBJECTIVES – PORTFOLIO – ESSAY – FEEDBACK

This LPE submission comprises:

1. This introduction and navigational guide

2. A selection of coursework and other activities relating to Learning Objectives

3. A Portfolio of creative work

4. The essay Assignment 4

5. A written reflection on the course

6. Tutor feedback on the assignment work

Please note that I maintain two web sites relating to this course – the intentionally labyrinthine BAPhot.co.uk covering the whole of the degree and, for each yearly module a relatively austere sub-domain, in this case, LPE.BAPhot.co.uk for assessment purposes.


2. Coursework illustrating Learning Objectives

 The relevant items of coursework are available online:

L01 visual and conceptual strategies
i Exercise 5.3 Unpacking and

ii Exercise 5.5 Photography and Advocacy.

In Exercise 5.3, Unpacking, I took issue with Kate Orff’s approach, as described in the course material, and apply a rather less imaginative approach to The Battery, New York, where Agnes Denes created Wheatfield…, 1982.
Exercise 5.5, Photography and Advocacy, compares Denes’ approach to other campaigns.


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26 Diners and
Motels in Newport

L02 social, cultural and ethical considerations

i Exercise 3.2 Postcard views and

ii Exercise 5.1 Eco-Criticism.

Postcard views, Exercise 3.2 comes to the defence of postcards as a resource and leads to the creation of a homage to Ed Ruscha’s TWENTYSIX GASOLINE STATIONS, 1963.
Eco-Criticism, Exercise 5.1, looks at the work of Richard Misrach.


L03 exploring a range of ideas

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From Exercise 2.2
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From Assignment 2

i Exercise 2.2 Explore a road and

ii Assignment 2 A Journey.

Exercise 2.2 identifies buildings which have changed their purpose, while tracing the route from Eltham Palace to the Stephen Lawrence Memorial.
Assignment 2 follows a route from Greenwich Observatory to Canary Wharf, concentrating on public art, while keeping the banking towers in view.


L04 research, managing time and resources

i Exercise 1.2. Museum & Gallery and

ii Assignment 4 Critical review.

Exercise 1.2 contrasts the views of Rosalind Krauss, Tod Papageorge and Douglas Crimp on the gallerisation of photography.
Assignment 4 was the most research-intensive task in the module, exploring image maniplulation in a variety of genres,


L05 autonomy, voice, and communication

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From Assignment 1

i Assignment 1 Beauty & the Sublime,

ii Voice development is covered in the reflection: this was a gradual process throughout the module and with confidence of voice comes autonomy of project development which can be seen throughout the lens-based Assignments.

iii Regarding communications, I have participated in the monthly(ish) LPE student discussion groups and various online courses organised by the OCA Student Association covering equality and diversity.
I volunteer at the Courtaulds Institute, photographing and cataloguing the Kersting and Conway archives.

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Nelson in bondage, NFT


The Ruscha homage has already been mentioned: following a prompt from my C&N tutor, I also produce a book every year relating to the course.
I am not a social media enthusiast and use it only sparingly. I am, though, an admirer of the hashtag and enjoyed Exploring Hashtags in Part 5: this led to the creation of an NFT which, regrettably, has not yet sold.


3. Portfolio of creative work

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From Assignment 1

The Assignments chosen are 1, 2 and 5, as A3 is mostly found material and A4 is the essay. These comments are based on the remarks in the Reflection. The links provided are to the online versions of the work.

Assignment 1. Vauxhall Bridge – produced some decent individual images that did justice to the current bridge, but there was not sufficient material to support the historical narrative that I intended. 

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From assignment 2

Assignment 2. Journey to Mammon – sculptures from Greenwich to Canary Wharf always with the towers in view was a worthwhile idea, though my tutor judged them over-processed and a rework was necessary. 

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From assignment 5 (still)

Assignment 5. Becoming subjects – “slideshows” of some local plant life (and death) required new skills in visual and music software. Because of the volume of data and the consequential file sizes, the subjects had to be uploaded to Vimeo and YouTube. As will be seen from the Assignment text, the envisaged display vehicle for the series would be the window of a local television shop or TVs on sale in a charity store.


4. Essay Assignment

Assignment 4, Grey Areas: The Ethics of Skies, as the title suggests, looks at the methods, reasons and justifications of manipulating the sky in landscape images, from Victorian times to the current day. It then broadens the examination of manipulation to other subjects and genres.

There is a copy on the G Drive formatted for the plagiarism check.



5. Reflection

This is available online or as a physical submission in the G Drive package.


6. Tutor Feedback

This is available on the G Drive as the original Word files as received from my tutor, or a composite document containing both the feedback and my responses.


FinAss in progress

[26Jan23] text

Email received this evening:

Dan Robinson 18:55 (1 hour ago) to Assessment

Dear photography student,
You are receiving this email from me because you are on the assessment team's list for the Spring 2023 assessment event.
This is just a courtesy email to let you know that the Assessment team plan to send out your G-Drive folder invites by midday tomorrow (unless they have any technical issues, which we would update you on should that be the case). I posted this morning to our photography level assessment support discussion thread, with a message of guidance aimed at anyone in photography who may be new to assessment, with links to OCA assessment guidance and our department level support via a forum and live sessions hosted next week. Full OCA assessment guidance was emailed to all students from the news@oca.ac.uk account on 11 January
Good luck with assessment and see some of you next week!
best, Dan


FA2

[26Jan] the contents and sequence in text is:

Guidance on preparing your submission

Chapters

  1. A selection of entries from your learning log
  2. A selection of creative work
  3. Critical Reviews
  4. A reflective presentation
  5. Plagiarism checks
  6. Preparing your submission

 

I will modify the submission to match this. No mention of assignment feedback - I'll add those - note the formatting guidance here - For plagiarism checks.

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FA3

[27Jan] The G Drive notification came today, together with a link to updated submission instructions. The tutor reports are back.

OCA Assessment Team (assessment@oca.ac.uk) has invited you to contribute to the following shared folder:
Dear Nick
This is your allocated Spring 2023 assessment GDrive folder (please note that if you are submitting more than one course unit for assessment, you will receive separate folder links for each).
You will have until 12:00 GMT on 10/02/2023 to upload your submission to this folder for the Spring 2023 event. Please ensure that you are referring to the up to date assessment guidance, which can be found here on OCA Learn: https://learn.oca.ac.uk/course/view.php?id=201.
In your folder you will see subfolders relevant to your unit, and a document called 'Undergraduate Assessment Checklist'. Please ensure you refer to this document when uploading your submission so that you can be sure you have uploaded all of your assessment requirements.
Good luck with your assessment,

Kind regards

OCA Assessment Team

1. What do I need to submit?

  1. A selection of learning log entries (or equivalent)
  2. A selection of creative work
  3. Any critical reviews, essays, or other written reports
  4. A reflective presentation or evaluation 
  5. Your tutor reports

Link - https://learn.oca.ac.uk/mod/book/view.php?id=16515&chapterid=1704

The navigation guide has been reordered accordingly.


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G Drive
G Drive

[29Jan] The submission components have been uploaded to the G Drive. The long document copied above has been split into sections for the various compartment folders.

Plagiarism
Plagiarism check
image source: searchenginereports.net

The plagiarism check is now run by the OCA using Turnitin. This is not available to the student. I tried various free checkers, non of which is satisfactory, all trying to scare users into buying the paid-for version. I'll wait and see what happens.

With the checker shown left, if you click on the examples shown, you link to a Google search and in one example the only plagiarism source shown is Asg4 on this very web site. I suppose that means it works after a fashion but not as a plagiarism checker.


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21 Dec

[21Dec]

The I&P submission text is here. It is pretty similar to the plan outlined below and I will use it to build the framework.

Introduction and navigation

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20Dec22

[20Dec] A6 submitted and returned. I am expecting "to be invited by 20th January 2023 to submit by 10th February with results by 27th March 2023" (see submission).

In the A6 submission I stated the likely components,


Summary of intended submissions

Before my I&P FA, there was an extremely useful online session with Edward Smith (Smith, 2021) and combining this with Appendix 3 (OCA, n.d.#2):

1. A course reflection of 750 words, based on the above (my health issues mandate a written rather than spoken version).
2. All the assignment feedback (annotated plus the originals ).
3. Two or three pieces of work intended to demonstrate progress on each of the LOs., see below.
4. A portfolio of visual work, usually 3 assignments.
5. The Assignment 4 essay, with a plagiarism check.
6. A guidance document to aid assessors’ navigation of the submission.

It is hoped that there is an online advice session before the next LPE FA submission date.

There are notes on my Assessment Page on which exercises or other work may be applicable to each LO. Likely candidates are:

LO1: Exercises 5.3 Unpacking, 5.5 Photography and Advocacy.

LO2: Exercises 3.2 Postcard views, 3.4 A Persuasive Image, 4.5 A Personal Voice, 5.1 Eco-Criticism, Part 5 Research Task 3, Exploring Hashtags.

LO3: Exercise 2.2 Explore a road, Assignments 2 A Journey and 5 Self directed, and, perhaps Treatment, as yet unfinished.

LO4: Exercises 2.3 Is Appropriation Appropriate?, 2.3 Sontag reading, 1.2. Museum & Gallery, 1.5 The contemporary abyss, 3.6 The Memory of Photography, Assignment 4 Critical review, and perhaps the Bob Zahn Evaluation

LO5: Assignment 1 Beauty & the Sublime, Treatment (unfinished) and descriptions of the LPE chat group and the SU courses, working at the Courtaulds etc.


I will proceed on that basis. The tutor's feedback was not very helpful, amounting to "too wordy".


29Oct22

[22Oct22] I have written LPE Asg.6 and will send it off next week, anticipating an invitation to " invited by 20th January 2023 to submit by 10th February with results by 27th March 2023" (Asg.6 intro).

Several links worth noting:

  1. 1. A comment from Dan Robinson on file sizes, "My advice as a general rule is to make image size between 1-3MB. Smaller or larger may be appropriate dependent on scale and nature of the work being shown. Assessors will view on screen, in most instances 1MB at 72DPI will be more than sufficient. There is no need for a margin, not sure where that came from". This comes from …
  2. 2. A chat thread on FA at https://discuss.oca-student.com/t/photography-assessment-support-forum/13817/1
  3. 3. The OCA Assessment Padlet.

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[22Sep21] A lesson learned from I&P is to plan for FinAss throughout the course. There might be new criteria the year (see here) but whataver's active, maintain this table when all the exercises are known.

means not applicable
1=certain 2= possible 3=at a stretch
means chosen

L01 - demonstrate visual and conceptual strategies in landscape photography
L02 - awareness of the wider social and cultural contexts and ethical perspectives
L03 - explore and realise a range of ideas and creative starting points
L04 - manage learning resources, conduct self-directed contextual and visual research
L05 - demonstrate increasing autonomy and a developing personal voice, and exercise your communication skills confidently and interact effectively within a learning group

Exercise L01 L02 L03 L04 L05 Z
         
1.1 Preconceptions - - - - -  
1.2. Museum & Gallery       2    
1.3 Establishing conventions - - - - -  
1.4 Perspectives on the sublime       3    
1.5 The contemporary abyss       2    
1.6 Zone system - - - - -  
Evaluation - Weston       2    
Asg.1 Beauty & the Sublime 2       2  
Treatment   2 2   2  
Diversity training         2  
LPE chat group         2  
2.1 Territorial Photography   2        
2.2 Explore a road   2 2      
2.3 Sontag reading       1    
2.3 Is Appropriation Appropriate?       1    
2.4 Text in Art - - - - -  
2.5 Edgelands - - - - -  
Evaluation - Zahn       2+    
Asg.2 A Journey     2+      
3.1 Reflecting on the picturesque   2        
3.2 Postcard views   1       1
3.3 Late photography - - - - -  
3.4 A Persuasive Image          
3.5 Local history - - - - -  
3.6 The Memory of Photography       2    
Evaluation - Brashear            
Asg.3 Spaces to Places - - - - -  
4.1 Critical review proposal - - - - -  
4.2 The British landscape during World War II - - - - -  
4.3 Researching gender and landscape   2        
4.4 Of Mother Nature and Marlboro Men   2        
4.5 A Personal Voice   1        
Evaluation - Faigenbaum            
Asg.4 Critical review   2    
5.1 Eco-Criticism   1        
5.2 Exploring - - - - -  
5.3 Unpacking 2+          
5.4 Mapping Change - Photography as Research - - - - -  
5.5 Photography and Advocacy 2+          
5.6 Contested Images - - - - -  
Evaluation - Denes           2
Asg.5 Self directed Assignment     1      

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LOs

[21Sep] from Course Guide for assessment of Photography units, Assessment Guidance Version: November 2021 event

PH5LPE – Photography 2: Landscape, Place and Environment (also includes PH5LDS - Photography 2: Landscape)

Learning Outcomes

LO1 demonstrate detailed knowledge of visual and conceptual strategies in landscape photography, the representation of place and be able to explore your own critical photographic projects

LO2 demonstrate an awareness of the wider social and cultural contexts that surround the representation of place, and be able to discuss relevant ethical perspectives in relation to your own practice

LO3 explore and realise a range of ideas and creative starting points, and exercise judgement in the production of visual material

LO4 manage learning resources, conduct self-directed contextual and visual research, and be able to appraise your progress with increasing confidence

LO5 demonstrate increasing autonomy and a developing personal voice, and exercise your communication skills confidently and interact effectively within a learning group

Suggestions on how to meet the Learning Outcomes

LO1 To evidence this part you could select learning log entries and examples of assignment work that show your knowledge of visual and conceptual strategies in landscape photography and the representation of place. In terms of showing your ability to explore your own critical photographic projects, you might 6 Course Guide for assessment of Photography units consider selecting examples that show how you have tested and understood these concerns.

LO2 It is likely that your learning log entries will evidence your emerging awareness of the wider social and cultural contexts that surround the representation of place. By selecting both learning log and assignment pieces you could show how you have articulated relevant ethical perspectives in relation to your own practice. You could use selected log entries to explicitly show you have considered ethics.

LO3 Your range of ideas and creative starting points is likely best evidenced in your learning log entries: demonstrating initial ideas, test-shoots, edits and final workings out. These could be accompanied by some evidence of critical reflection and relevant decisions to show how you have exercise judgement in the production of visual material.

LO4 The Critical Review (2,000 word essay) in part 4 will evidence the main focal point for evidencing your awareness of the wider social and cultural contexts will likely help to show your ability to conduct self-directed contextual and visual research. Selected learning log entries and assignment pieces will likely evidence your understanding of visual research and together these can help show assessors the connections you have made between contextual and visual research.

LO5 Your learning log will likely demonstrate your developing personal voice and engagement with your learning community - this could be amongst the OCA student body through forum activity, group work sessions, study visits or regional groups; or your increasing autonomy may relate to interacting with photographers outside OCA. Try to identify where in this project your interactions have helped shape your developing practice, knowledge, understanding and communication skills, then select any aspects of the work that help to show this.

Assessment Criteria The assessment criteria for this course unit is Stage Two (HE5), available from OCA Learn: https://learn.oca.ac.uk/course/view.php?id=201

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Posts

17th / 25th December

Result

The results came out yesterday. 60% after 62%for C&N and 53% for EyV. If my tutor had asked "what mark do you expect?" (which at least one did, reported in the I&P chat group) I would have replied, "higher than EyV, but lower than C&N". That turned out to be accurate, but still something of a disappointment after the effort that went into the FinAss.
So it goes, that's the level of performance tutors expect and that's the level of marks I'll expect.

Here's the report.

The full list of marks is not on the OCA web site yet, but here's my archive ready.

Assessment results archive

Here are the results from https://learn.oca.ac.uk/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=334

[12Aug21] July 21 too, https://learn.oca.ac.uk/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=470

[25Dec21] November 21, from this search.

Stage 1

Expressing Your Vision
Nov 21 - 72, 72, 71, 71, 66, 66, 65, 64, 64, 64, 63, 62, 62, 62, 61, 58, 57, 57, 55, 54, 53, 52, 48, 47
Jul 21 - 65, 62, 60, 60, 58, 53, 53, 51
Mar 21 - 75, 72, 71, 70, 64, 63
Nov 20 - 80, 64, 62, 62, 61, 60, 58, 58, 57, 57, 57, 56, 53, 52, 52, 51
Summer 20 - 78, 72, 72, 68, 68, 66, 66, 65, 65, 63, 63, 62, 62, 62, 58, 55, 54, 53
Mar 20 - 50, 51, 52, 52, 53, 54, 58, 58, 61, 62, 64
Nov 19 - 42, 48, 53, 54, 54, 55, 67
Jul 19 - 50, 52, 52, 54, 54, 59, 60, 63, 65, 66, 67, 72
Mar 19 - 59, 62, 65, 65, 65

Context and Narrative
Nov 21 - 81, 71, 69, 68, 63, 60, 54, 53, 52, 0
Jul 21 - 70, 66, 65, 63, 63, 62, 62, 60, 56, 48, 0
Mar 21 - 72, 68, 66, 65, 64, 62, 58, 55, 54, 54, 46
Nov 20 - 78, 77, 70, 66, 62, 61, 60, 60, 58, 58
Summer 20 - 74, 70, 66, 60, 56, 55, 50, 0
Mar 20 - 53, 57, 58, 62, 62, 63, 65, 65
Nov 19 - 62, 63, 72, 73
Jul 19 - 0 (!), 46, 48, 51, 58, 62, 63, 63, 64, 65, 66, 70
Mar 19 - 54, 54, 55, 56, 56, 58, 61, 65, 65, 66, 68, 69, 72, 73, 85

Identity and Place
Nov 21 - 72, 68, 66, 61, 60, 55
Jul 21 - 76, 70, 63, 63, 61, 52
Mar 21 - 68, 64, 61, 57, 56, 53, 48
Nov 20 - 76, 72, 71, 68, 68, 67, 65, 63
Summer 20 - 72, 68, 64, 63, 58, 58, 58, 50, 47, 0
Mar 20 - 68, 62, 58, 50, 46, 43
Nov 19 - 72, 70, 68, 67, 65, 64, 63, 62, 61, 60, 60, 60, 52
Jul 19 - 64
Mar 19 - 73, 60, 58, 54, 53, 51

Stage 2

Documentary Fact & Fiction
Nov 21 - 66, 55
Jul 21 - 67, 64, 62, 58, 55
Mar 21 - none

Landscape, Place and Environment
Nov 21 - 82, 70, 55, 0
Jul 21 - 82, 81, 71, 68, 67, 65, 65, 62, 60, 60
Mar 21 - 75, 65, 62, 58, 56

The Self and the Other
Nov 21 - 67
Jul 21 - 66, 63,
Mar 21 - 68, 65

Digital Image and Culture
Nov 21 - 71, 68, 65, 58
Jul 21 - 78, 75, 68, 57, 53
Mar 21 - 78, 76, 75, 67, 63

Stage 3

Body of Work
Nov 21 - 90, 72, 68, 67, 61, 60, 55
Jul 21 - 83
Mar 21 - 83, 78, 72, 68, 67, 56, 54

Contextual Studies
Nov 21 - 92, 73, 68, 64, 60, 58
Jul 21 - 95
Mar 21 - 77, 70, 67, 67, 65, 53, 50

Sustaining your Practice
Nov 21 - 93, 77, 55, 43
Jul 21 - 88, 81, 72, 72, 65
Mar 21 - 85, 80, 72, 71

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